It was an ordinary day.I was having a great time singing in the car on my way to gym.It was winter holiday ,but it didn’t feel much like a holiday .I didn’t know what was to come,what was to come I didn’t know .I finally arrived at gym. There’s normally music on , but today there’s not . Something is not right.I stepped inside.Darkness filed the room some one was in the back room. The lights flicked on.There’s a shadow. As I turned round it changed shape.Its coming for me.NO,NO.That was the end ……. or was it.
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