What happened last night-By Amelie Class 9

I’m on a ship called Avalon it’s a two hundred and thirty three century journey to a  new home called Jaque. BUT I heard something and as I turned round it changed shape! There was no one around I screamed and shouted “Hello is any body here hello!” I was panicking… I was so scared I had woken up one hundred and ninety nine years early. Am I alone who’s to tell this ship is huge? Scared and lonely worried and terrified what is going on? Suddenly,my heart stopped beating and I fell to the ground with a big thud!

One thought on “What happened last night-By Amelie Class 9

  1. Well done Amelie! Brilliant 100WC! I love it

    I like your use of top secret sentences
    I like your use of Rhetorical question
    Next time you could use some more 2ad

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