As my mind went walking into a dark place my hart started to beat fast,my face started to get sweaty. What was happening? Why me,soon I saw a shape it looked blue. As i turned round it changed shape into a green shape. Eventually lots of seats popped up in my face. What was this?Then a blank wall showed up and played a nursery rime it sang ring a ring a roses. THEN they dispersed I fell to the ground but nothing happen. My mind went blank. What happen to me while I was in my dream? help me out…
well done harleigh that was amazing
i liked the way you presented the story
and i also like the vast range vocabulary that you used
next time you could write the rest of the story and tell us what happens in the end