The Monster in Spain Luke CL 11 100WC

Shocked, I was just eating my nachos, until I heard a loud BANG downstairs. Suddenly, I strolled to my clear,clean window and I saw blood red and sky blue police cars outside. Confused, the dirty police cars seemed to be surrounding my whole entire house. Frightened, What was it? Thoughts flew through my brainy head like wildfire spreading like a Spanish army. Curious, I heard it again I slipped out my chair  and raced downstairs to investigate. It was a monster with bright red eyes as I turned round it changed shape to a man with scars. Horrified, I ran….!

One thought on “The Monster in Spain Luke CL 11 100WC

  1. WOW Bendigedeg Luke!
    you have a great story and a fantastic rhetorical question.
    you also have used onomatopoeia which i struggle to use in sentences.
    Next time can you use more different top secret sentences.

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