It was dark: dark because I was covered in trees. As I was admiring the views when I saw a shadow I carried on walking but it appeared again. As I turned around it changed shape… I felt a chill down my spine as a strange sensation take over my body. I felt my head fill with bad thoughts as I ran from this strange thing that was chasing me. I ran for my life without looking back. I cried for help as I didn’t know what to do. I screamed. I ran. I stopped. I fell. I woke up.
http://Www…A super piece of writing Martha and effective use of top secret sentences!
Ebi…check your tenses please!