Why can I never sleep on Christmas eve? It’s like a tradition, but something’s different tonight; it only 5 minutes until Christmas, then its 4. Then 3, 2, 1. Then there was a voice. But just at that second, something knocked me out… Scared,confused I woke up with sweat trickling down my forehead, what’s happening to me right now? I tried to wriggle out of this nightmare but failed; it was like I was stuck to this cold,metal table like a magnet stuck on a fridge. This must be a invasion! As I turned around it changed shape, destroying everything in its path… HELP US!
Amazing, Isabelle!
You have outstanding rhetorical questions,
You have used some incredible adjectives as well,
Next time try and use a bit more top secret sentences!