What was to come. I asked myself. It was the school holidays. It wasn’t much of a holiday in my opinion, I was at my Auntie Sarah’s house. I despise her! I was getting out of bed frantically. As I walked downstairs I saw faint shadows. As I turned round it changed shape… What on earth could it ? I asked myself feeling terrified. Confused, worried, horrified I saw the corpse of my poor aunt. Was I imagining things? Had she been murdered or was it a natural cause? I started to call my mum but a hand touched me…
Well done, Grace! This is a spooky story with lots of mystery. I like the way you described the way the main character felt and I really like the ending. It makes me want to find out more!
It may be a good idea to double-check your punctuation before you publish I wonder if ‘What was to come’ should have a question mark?
Creative work – well done!
Mrs Evans
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Whoa that was quite creepy