As I fell in to a sort of magical, mechanical body I saw a robot come towards me… The robot said to me, you are a special boy you have been chosen to become a robot but only today so enjoy it. I got on with it I looked at the control this wonderful, amazing robot suddenly walked forward I saw everything I even flew . As I flew over New York I saw the beautiful buildings. As I turned round it all changed shape the buildings were circles I couldn’t believe my eyes. would you do what I did?
I really like this use of writing,well done Reuben.
liked your use of rhetorical questions.
Next time you could use some similys